TheGreyWolf1600's game Reviews on Newgrounds

[Parabator - Top-down shooter with Cyber Chernobyl]

Alright. I'll be honest with ya, mate. This is... not a good game. At all. But for a first attempt at making games, it's not bad. It's functional, if barely.

The pros:
- Interesting story concept
- It doesn't crash instantly/not work at all

The cons:
- Art and sprites look like they were shamelessly stolen from Google Images
- The sound effects are grating and painful on the ears
- The gameplay is unengaging, without challenge, and pretty boring
- It has a tendency to randomly pause for a few seconds every now and then
- The lighting randomly goes either pitch black, or very bright for half-second increments, often in close relation to the pauses mentioned above
- The most challenging aspect of the gameplay is ignoring the bugs and staying interested

Overall, you could do a lot better in so many aspects. Don't give up on making games though, I know you can make something great! I suggest watching videos on game design, get a better idea of what you want to make and really devote your all to it.

Best of wishes.

P.S: Very mild thing, but I suggest you work on your English and grammar. Would help you out a ton.

[Epic Battle Fantasy 2]

Awesome game, and there's not much I can say about it.

Only, around the sandworm fight, something happened. Close to midnight in reality, I've been wielding the Blood Blade for a bit, playing on easy, and suddenly, I notice that Matt's eyes are scribbled over in black, outlined in red. Very Creepypasta. Then I revive Nat, and she has the same thing. It started fading out a bit later, but still. It would disappear whenever I performed an action, but re-appeared immediately after. I first noticed it when Nat was down, auto-Air Strike triggered, and it was the Dark Bomb.

Any idea what that was? I don't want my dreams haunted by this. Also, I can send a screenshot, if that helps.

[EBF5 NPC Maker]

11,3,4,50,2,2,2,11,4,7,20,10
Name: Harland
Race: Vampire
Class: Cleric
Job Title: Unholy Lord of the Dark One
Bio: Not really known. And too long to write up.
Notable moments: Slaying of the last White King
Embarrassing moments: Hard to describe, so just look at this photo 11,3,4,52,2,2,2,35,2,7,53,2

[Darth VADER]

What is this? Nothing more than an animated loop of bulls**t that some jacka** decided to upload as a game.